The Gods And Goddesses Had A Plan
The Gods & Goddesses had a plan
When their Spirits crossed Paths by affiliation
Those above Pointed at Her as she entered into the glass door
and then Pointed at Him as he stood by the counter
It was at that Time
Their Eyes met and it was
Love At First Sight
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The Gods & Goddesses had a plan
they brought this Man and Woman
Together.
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The Gods & Goddesses had a plan
They shall bear Children Together
they shall live Their Lives
they will share many Ups & Downs
When They were Ready to Dissolve
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The Gods & Goddesses had a Plan
To bring this Man, and this Woman
back Together as Equals and in
Love.
As Time is Infinite
So is Their Love
They Share
They Feel
They Express to One Another
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The Gods & Goddesses Had it Planned All Along.
This is a very good poem and I like the flow of the beginning, but may I ask why did you put the capitalization on most of your words? It seems over used and defeats the purpose.
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Dear Paris,
I would like to compliment you on writing at such a young age. To answer your question the “words” that are capitalized are because of the meaning behind them. If I were writing a term paper, you can bet I would make sure that my grammar and punctuation were correct. This is not a term paper. As you start to read different genre you will see a variety of writing styles. I encourage your comments, and questions. Keep on writing : )
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